You need major improvements in terms of art style (too messy) and animations (doesn't transition smoothly, feels too fast, and highlights the weaknesses of the art) before I give this more than 2 stars.
Also, when is this scene going to be? Beginning, middle, or end?
um... this particular project i made the trailer so i could know what direction to take the story into.
the trailer took me literally about an hour.
and the art style, if you don't like it then that's just you. it's my art style and i'm not going to change that for you. it's mine, simple enough.
Banks aren't monopolies. Monopolies are a much bigger pain in the ass than any bank can throw at you.
You ever thought of submitting your videos as actual videos and not [.sfw]s? I keep $missing improtant information whenever a fucking car comes by my house. Fucking windows amplify sound to the point where it echos throughout the room!
Anyways, this was fucking hilarious, and crude. Nice roasting of MLP fans by the way.
"Flattering fanart"...
Good, but quality needs some improvement. Especially sound, get a better microphone.
I'm saving that money yo.
Meh, it kind of reflects the material you were parodying.
It was more about the sentiment than the content. I admit this hasn't aged well.
Larry's dialogue is kind of boring. But the introduction was hilarious.
There's a definite change in comedic style after the intro. I wanted to start it off with something a little more engaging.
A minion is essentially a sweatshop slave anyways.
In a sense. But I have sympathy for sweatshop minions, while minions deserve my ire.
Sadly, these jokes aren't up to par for me. They're spammed too.
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