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[Pico and the Culling of Cringe (1/2)]

I don't see any sonic pictures in the portal much.

Okay, now something relevant. I find all the characters and objects to be incredibly plastic-like. The weapons, like Pico's knife, don't look very dangerous, unlike how you made the straw that killed Wendy in one of your earlier works.

The reflection off the ground is nice but it feels like it assumed the people are in a brightly lit room. I don't get that from the rest of the background. If the room was brightly lit or those reflections were instead shadows, I'd find it more believable.

And... that's about it. I don't think I have anything else to say about this picture.

Oh right, you forgot about the OW cringe. Also, fuck MLP.

BONESofBURIED responds:

Clearly you have all the answers as a non artist lol

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Proportions are wrong. Especially for the sword, as you scan towards the top of the blade, the way the hand and the handle are position makes the sword look like it's bent.

[Be Quiet]

I remember Totally Spies.

I'M A MANLY MAN!

[You're Home!]

I love the detail that you put into her boobies.

In all seriousness though, it would be nice if you made a comic out of this. Then again, I know how hard such a commitment would be, so I'd not expect much.

Plot twist: the husband is a bisexual that wanted some dick all along.

[ZONE-tan]

This was on ZTV news, so I guess that's how I landed here.

By the way, I'd start preparing for a major influx of views in the coming days.

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!!
Wooooooooooow!! Unbelievable!!!!
Oh dear, the goddess ZONE-TAN....

[SMASH]

This is quite amazing.

What is this from?

[Newspapers]

It would be cool if there was an additional party member that would tear those things apart.

Especially the Alt-R one, just ripping it up and lighting it on fire would be glorious.

[Zone]

I'm guessing that there's a reason only the top part is shown? Is there something naughty going on down below?

Okay, now something serious, the picture to me seems a little flat. I'd expect wrinkles in her sweater for example, and the boobs feel off, as if they were drawn to look like she's leaning forwards even though her body clearly isn't. So, one of the two things might need to be fixed.