JJMAJR's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Donkey Kong's Stop N' Swop]

There was convoluted, but there was also unnecessary. Many, many things were unnecessary in this submission, such as the last bit where the big monkey said "he" multiple times and nothing else, not really giving a reason behind the big monkey's actions.

The fact that the little guy said "oh" multiple times afterwards made that sting a little worse.

Then there was Mario saying "shut the fuck up Luigi" and that only being justified by him wanting to spend time exclusively with Donkey Kong. That was just... sad. And unoriginal, especially for the parody genre.

The only funny part about this was that Mario learned about how hard it was to do Donkey Kong's job and how much of a lardass DK was at climbing, but even then DK exhibited climbing skills in the original game. So again, if someone just turned on their brain for ten seconds they would have seen through this.

This is lame. Nothing original and the humour would have been more punctual if it built upon facts that were pointed out. However, even humour in itself is not something that I would like to see anyways. The best humour is humour that is delivered in an environment of trust, and not breaking the characters or making them stereotypes.

JumpNJetz responds:

oh. oh. oh. oh.
-Jetz

[The Other Side]

Great response to a shitty joke. Awesome job, but seen better.

Still an awesome job. Just a harsh critic.

flushstudios responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, it's not brilliant. But I'm glad you got at least a bit of enjoyment out of it... Even a little chuckle is better than nothing, eh?

[GIRL & IT]

Jesus, now I have to rate things harder! This is plenty better than 90% of the stuff I find around Newgrounds.

mohdfikree responds:

Hi! Thank you so much! And nah, come on! There are other great animations here in Newgrounds like ones from Harry Partridge, Max (Hotdiggedydemon), Arin (Egoraptors) and many more.

[Short: The Radio]

Again, you need to make this animation more elaborate. Also, "n***a"? Do you WANT to make a crude racist joke? Pathetic, I am sorry.

ExodusTerminator responds:

I remove that joke and i'm change it!
My apology

[[SFM] No Fear]

This was... bland. Sorry dude, you need purpose behind that peashooter.

Zelpai responds:

Yeah... this was an older SFM, I am improving as I make more, though.

[Global Warming]

This was rather... different. I don't know how to react to this material. Maybe make it a component in a larger series of animated shorts?

BadWorks responds:

and i just did that, thanks for the advice dude

[Final]

Sorry, I have to give this a 2. Even though it is a final for your animation class you could have gotten some kind of purpose behind it. This is the equivalent of a rushed project.

You could have cut out the blood tears, they don't make sense. If you titled this video more appropriately or had the original concept be more closely tied to the video people would know what to expect from it, and I would have rated it higher.

jlboocker responds:

It's my first animation, and there are a lot of things I could have done differently. I was rushed, because I only had a week to do it, and I am also a single father with a full time job. The "blood tears" are supposed to be him getting angry, but I didn't know how to properly show him turning red. As far as the title, I honestly didn't think about it. To be honest, I'm surprised anyone rated this, let alone seven or eight others. I appreciate any and all feedback, so don't be sorry. I really do appreciate it. Thanks for taking the time to view and comment.